Could someone check some lyrics I've written please?

[Linda Miggly]

Hi there,

I've written a song in french and it would be fantastic if someone could check over the lyrics for grammar, use of idioms and generally if it makes sense. If anyone could, I'll email or link them the lyrics.

Many thanks,

Linda Miggly.

[guillaume]

Salut

 

Tu peux m'envoyer tes paroles je les regarderai avec plaisir

 

Cdt

 

Guillaume

[urielle lumen]

Je voudrais lire votre chanson.