I would like to know how to say 2 phrases in french, i tryed to do it my self and this is what i came up with

[JOnathan]

I want more without giving out more.

 

Je vouloir plus de sans lui vouloir.

 

AND

 

I want to soar without ending up sore

 

Je vouloir envoler sans desinence avoir mal.

 

Please tell me if I am right or if i need to change it

prefferably I would like it to rhyme but its not needed.

thank you very much

[James H Smith]

How does this sound ?

a) Je veux plus sans donner plus,

b) Je veux m'envoler sans finir par faire mal.

Sorry, I can't get it to rhyme !

[JOnathan]

thats fine i can make it work with my cadence and hythm thank you so very much

[Roland Jondeau]

Recevoir sans avoir à fournir
S'envoler sans avoir à souffrir